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Blood

They say blood is thicker than water. Water was turned into wine. Wine is the drink of the sophisticated. The sophisticated are perceived as superior to the meek. But the meek shall inherit the earth. The earth has seen so many wars. Wars have spilled so much blood. Blood is the beginning. Blood is the end. Blood is everywhere. Blood is in us, makes us, feeds us, sustains us, kills us. The blood of innocents. The blood of The Lamb. Blood brothers. Bloody Sunday. Blood. The foundation, the basis, the whole. Is there anything so vague as blood? It can do so much to so many, for so many. Make us strong, make us faint, make us live, make is die. Make us give. Make us kill. Blood represents life. Death. Love. Pain. It is everything.
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This is a response to this week’s Indie Ink Writing Challenges. My prompt came from K. Syrah: “Love is thick like blood, like honey. -Holly Brook”.

I honestly had no freakin’ clue what to do with this prompt. I’ve had a really frustrating case of writers’ block with this one. “Blood is thicker than water” popped into my head, so I just started typing and this is what came out. Welcome to my scatterbrain! This is what I get for forgetting to sign up for last week.

My prompt went to Caroline: “The dark passenger awaits.”

P. S. If I should’ve given credit for any famous quotes in that rambling mess, forgive me and point me in the direction of the source. I honestly have no clue if any of the above should be credited to a specific person as opposed to them being just frequently repeated phrases (with the exception of the meek inheriting the earth, which is from the Bible).

  • http://frommywriteside.wordpress.com The Drama Mama

    I enjoyed the rambling, the placement of the quotes and the way they flowed through the piece, coming all together at the very end. Beautifully done!

    • http://theschmorgasboard.com PandorazBox80

      Thank you! I appreciate that. I’m glad that you were able to see a gem in my… garbled mess heap lol

  • http://frommywriteside.wordpress.com The Drama Mama

    I enjoyed the rambling, the placement of the quotes and the way they flowed through the piece, coming all together at the very end. Beautifully done!

    • http://theschmorgasboard.com PandorazBox80

      Thank you! I appreciate that. I’m glad that you were able to see a gem in my… garbled mess heap lol

  • http://debragrayelliott.blogspot.com/ Debra Ann Gray-Elliott

    I like the way your words flowed around this topic like blood flows through our veins.Great job!

    • http://theschmorgasboard.com PandorazBox80

      Thank you! I hadn’t thought of it that way. Well said!

  • Feisty Cat

    I liked it … you cannot beat stream of consciousness … it flowed.

    –Feisty Cat

  • http://viewsfromnature.com Carrie

    I like the randomness of it.

    • http://theschmorgasboard.com PandorazBox80

      Thank you all! I’m really surprised with all this positive feedback. Maybe I should do this more often! =D

  • http://theschmorgasboard.com PandorazBox80

    Thank you! I hadn’t thought of it that way. Well said!

  • http://thinspiralnotebook.wordpress.com/ Tara R.

    I like this stream of consciousness piece too. It just seems to flow naturally. 

    • http://theschmorgasboard.com PandorazBox80

      Thanks Tara! I’m overwhelmed at all the feedback!

  • Anonymous

    I could see Daniel Day Lewis as Bill the Butcher in Gangs of New York delivering this in the saloon! Good post, I enjoyed the read!

    • http://theschmorgasboard.com PandorazBox80

      Thank you! Wow! That’s an interesting and very flattering compliment!

  • http://debbiehav.com/ Debbie

    This is bloody wonderful.

    • http://theschmorgasboard.com PandorazBox80

      Lol thank you!

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    • FlamingNyx

      I love the way you mind works and the way you hands follow your thoughts :)

      • http://theschmorgasboard.com PandorazBox80

        Thank you! I love the way you worded that. I feel a story coming on…